【书面表达】2020年中考英语书面表达赏析01_talk

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杭州市2020年中考

【试题】

假定你是李平, 请阅读以下邮件并回复。内容包括 接受邀请询问至少三个相关细节(如具体地点……)

注意:

1. 词数80左右;

2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

Dear Li Ping,

We would like to invite you to give us a talk on Chinese folk music. The talk will be on the evening of Friday, July 10h at 7:00. If you're able to come, please reply in writing to this invitation by July 2m. Hope you can make it!

Larry Smith

President of Foreign Students' Club

【回信】

Dear Larry,

___________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Ping

【范文】

One possible version:

Dear Larry,

Thank you very much for the invitation. It's my pleasure to give a talk on Chinese folk music. Friday evening is fine with me, but I'm wondering where the talk will be held. I would be thankful if I could know who will come to the talk. I also would like to know whether it's okay to bring with me some Chinese musical instruments so that I could share some famous pieces with those present.

Looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

Li Ping

(约80 词)

【主题】

1. 回电子邮件。

2. 回邀请函。

【结构】三段式:

开头:

Thank you very much for the invitation

感谢开头,这也是一种非常经典的套话,有的写作这句话会给出,有的不会,无论如何, 把它背下来.

It's my pleasure to give a talk on Chinese folk music.

此句一出,即表示了常规的客套,有显示了礼貌,跟上一句是紧密联系在一起的。

在这个开头中,大家注意 两个表达方法

1. Thank you very much for.......

2. It's my pleasure to do sth......

中间:

1. 明确表态:到底是去还是不去? (这里不得不啰嗦几句,我们在写作文的过程中,往往有的同学苦于字数不够,罗里吧嗦一大堆,结果讲不到重点,这篇范文可以说是非常经典了,前面来两句客套话,然后迅速进入主题,去不去,给个痛快话,这个好像跟我们日常生活中的很多情况也是一样的。)

Friday evening is fine with me.

2. 三个细节,

第一where

but I'm wondering wherethe talk will be held.

第二who

I would be thankful if I could know whowill come to the talk.

第三是否可带乐器

I also would like to know whetherit's okay to bring with me some Chinese musical instruments so that I could share some famous pieces with those present.

三个细节逐项展开,条理清晰,层次分明,还愁字不够吗?只要思路打得开,80字怎么可能把故事讲的精彩,要不是题目限制了80字左右,就这个故事,写一篇8000字的大作文一点问题没有。

结尾:

Looking forward to your reply!

表达期待,同样也是一句客套话。

全篇下来,精彩!!!

【审题分析】

本题应该算得上半开放性的试题,虽然规定了格式,和行文的基本要求,但是在询问的细节中,并没有做出具体的要求,给出的范文是问了地点、人物、可否带乐器这三个细节, 同学们可以思考一些,还有哪些细节可以问的?欢迎大家一起讨论

【短语积累】

1. be able to

2.be thankful 感激的

3.bring sth with sb 把某物带在身边 ( 当sth太长时可以把with sb 提前达到平衡)

4.so that 以便, 为了

5.share sth with sb 与某人分析某物

6.looking forward to 期待

7.would like to 想

【句型积累】

1. Thank you very much for the invitation.

非常感谢你的邀请。

Thank sb for sth

因为某事而感谢某人。

2. It's my pleasure to give a talk on Chinese folk music.

我很高兴给大家做一个关于中国民族音乐的报告。

It be ... to do sth

是一个固定句型

【语法分析】

1.but I'm wondering where the talk will be held.

但是我想知道演讲将在哪里举行。

where the talk will be held 作动词wonder的宾语从句。

2.I would be thankful if I could know who will come to the talk.

如果我知道谁会来听演讲,我会很感激。

if I could know who will come to the talk. If引导条件状语从句。

who will come to the talk作动词know的宾语从句。

3.I also would like to know whether it's okay to bring with me some Chinese musical instruments so that I could share some famous pieces with those present.

我也想知道是否可以带一些中国的乐器一起去,这样我可以和在场的人分享一些著名的作品。

whether it's okay to bring with me some Chinese musical instruments作动词know的宾语从句。

it's okay to bring with me some Chinese musical instruments

是 It be adj to do sth 句型。

so that I could share some famous pieces with those present,

是so that 引导的目的状语从句。

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