To make our life colorful, we took part in an after-class activity — picking oranges with my friends last weekend in the countryside, and it was a fantastic experience.
In the morning we arrived at a farm with lots of big oranges hanging on the green trees. We walked through the trees and looked for oranges and picked them one by one. Meanwhile, I competed with my friends to see who gathers with the fastest speed and best quality. In the end, all of us not only gained many fresh and tasty fruits, but also learnt efficient ways to gather oranges well.
Personally, I was a little tired, but I was happy to learn that labor is important and meaningful.
Last weekend，we took part in a picking activity. We drove from the school, and the farm was about 2 kilometers away from our school. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds of animals, green fresh vegetables and fruit trees on the farm. We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for picking fruits, and the other packed up the fruits. Time flying quickly, the activity was over. But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lot form it. Through this activity, we know how hard the farmers are and how precious the food is. We should treasure the food planted by the farmers.
Last week, our class went to a farm to do a vegetable picking in order to experience the joy of picking vegetables in person and learn more about organic vegetables.①
When we arrived, there was a farmer explaining to us how they planted organic vegetables and which vegetable we could pick.② Then we picked organic vegetables by ourselves, such as cucumbers, tomatoes, eggplants. The most exciting part was that we cooked the vegetables together.③ At that time, I had a lot of harvests and learned a lot of knowledge about organic vegetables!?
It was a very meaningful activity and not only can I have some new discoveries but also I experience the joy of labor and enrich my knowledge.④
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